hi, teacher

2018-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Asia

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, Asia. Thank you very much your feedback for every day:) Today's home work "If love was embodied by a human being, who would it be?". I'm sorry I can't understand what this question's mean. I'll be apreciate if your give me the answer sheet. Every morning when I'm talking with you, I feel fraustrated because I can't express myself well in english. You know... I want talk about opinions more sepcifically but I can't. But It's going to be better in the course of time, right? Anyway teacher Asia hava a great Monday. And I feel a bit sad because our last day approches fast.. Take care!!

강사 첨삭

Hi Jane! Yes, no worries! I know feedback is important to help you! :)

Anyway, my answer to that question is, my daughter. My daughter is my source of love. She defines love to me.

And I feel sad too saying goodbye to you this early! Take care too!

Today\'s home work \"If love was embodied by a human being, who would it be?\".
I\'m sorry I can\'t understand what this question\'s mean.

>>I\'m sorry, I can\'t understand this question.
 I\'ll be apreciate if your give me the answer sheet.
>>I\'d appreciate it if you gave me sample answer.
Every morning when I\'m talking with you, I feel fraustrated because I can\'t express myself well in english.

>>Every morning when I talk to you, I feel frustrated because I can\'t express myself well in English.
 You know... I want talk about opinions more sepcifically but I can\'t.

>>You know, I want to talk more and give my opinions specifically but I can\'t.
 But It\'s going to be better in the course of time, right?
>>But it\'s going to get better in time, right? 

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