Hi, teacher!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, teacher. Thank you for letting me talk about the subject I'm very familiar with. Soccer is the subject I can always talk about. And I respect you after knowing that how you can listen and talk about soccer with me although that is not the subject you're familiar with. And I'm a little jealous of you, and curious how I can also do that :)
And today's the first day of a new week. In my history, if the first day of the week goes well, the whole week also goes well. And if I believe good things would happen, It happen. And today, I think good things will happen to both of us. Enjoy the rest of today. see you tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름],
It\'s my job as a teacher to at least have a general knowledge about everything. Of course no one could really be a master of all trades but I try to learn as much as I can. You can do it too since you are an intelligent person.
Hi, teacher.
>> correct!
Thank you for letting me talk about the subject I\'m very familiar with.
>> correct!
Soccer is the subject I can always talk about.
>> correct!
And I respect you after knowing that how you can listen and talk about soccer with me although that is not the subject you\'re familiar with.
>> And I respect you after knowing that you can listen and talk about soccer with me although it is not the subject that you\'re familiar with.
And I\'m a little jealous of you, and curious how I can also do that :)
>> correct!
And today\'s the first day of a new week.
>> correct!
In my history/experience, if the first day of the week goes well, the whole week also goes well.
>> correct!
And if I believe good things would happen, It happen.
>> And if I believe good things would happen, It will happen.
And today, I think good things will happen to both of us.
>> correct!
Enjoy the rest of today. See you tomorrow.
>> correct!
It\'s my job as a teacher to at least have a general knowledge about everything. Of course no one could really be a master of all trades but I try to learn as much as I can. You can do it too since you are an intelligent person.
Hi, teacher.
>> correct!
Thank you for letting me talk about the subject I\'m very familiar with.
>> correct!
Soccer is the subject I can always talk about.
>> correct!
And I respect you after knowing that how you can listen and talk about soccer with me although that is not the subject you\'re familiar with.
>> And I respect you after knowing that you can listen and talk about soccer with me although it is not the subject that you\'re familiar with.
And I\'m a little jealous of you, and curious how I can also do that :)
>> correct!
And today\'s the first day of a new week.
>> correct!
In my history/experience, if the first day of the week goes well, the whole week also goes well.
>> correct!
And if I believe good things would happen, It happen.
>> And if I believe good things would happen, It will happen.
And today, I think good things will happen to both of us.
>> correct!
Enjoy the rest of today. See you tomorrow.
>> correct!
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