Hi Teacher~:)
학생이 쓴 원문
what is your biggest failure in your life?
My biggest failure would be love.
When it comes to romantic relationship, I was afraid that what if I get hurts if I love him too much.
After we broke up, I couldn't move on from our past relationship for 2 years as I was regret that I couldn’t do my best for my ex boyfriend.
But that was my foolish act.
I should have thought that was one of the process to find and learn about how to love.
I decided not to do self-accusing anymore what already passed and finished.
From that experience, I learned that , If love comes to me again , I would like to do my best as much as I can.
Thank you Teacher~!
강사 첨삭
Hi, Aileen!
Thank you for sharing this experience about love.
Experience is the best teacher, as they say.
You will not learn or know the feeling if you don\'t experience something.
It\'s better to be hurt sometimes, because we learn from the pain that we felt.
See you!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
>> What is your biggest failure in your life? (Start the sentence with a capital letter.)
My biggest failure would be love.
My biggest failure would be love.
>> correct
When it comes to romantic relationship, I was afraid that what if I get hurts if I love him too much.
When it comes to romantic relationship, I was afraid that what if I get hurts if I love him too much.
>> When it comes to a romantic relationship, I am afraid that if I love too much I might get hurt.
After we broke up, I couldn\'t move on from our past relationship for 2 years as I was regret that I couldn’t do my best for my ex boyfriend.
After we broke up, I couldn\'t move on from our past relationship for 2 years as I was regret that I couldn’t do my best for my ex boyfriend.
>> After we broke up, I couldn\'t move on from our past relationship for 2 years and I regretted that I couldn’t do my best for my ex boyfriend.
>> or: After my broke up with my ex boyfriend, I couldn\'t move on from our past relationship for 2 years and I regretted that I wasn\'t able to do my best for him.
But that was my foolish act.
>> or: After my broke up with my ex boyfriend, I couldn\'t move on from our past relationship for 2 years and I regretted that I wasn\'t able to do my best for him.
But that was my foolish act.
>> correct
I should have thought that was one of the process to find and learn about how to love.
I should have thought that was one of the process to find and learn about how to love.
>> I should have thought that that was one of the processes to find and learn about how to love.
I decided not to do self-accusing anymore what already passed and finished.
>> I decided not to blame myself anymore about what already happened or finished.
From that experience, I learned that , If love comes to me again , I would like to do my best as much as I can.
>> correct
Thank you Teacher!
I decided not to do self-accusing anymore what already passed and finished.
>> I decided not to blame myself anymore about what already happened or finished.
From that experience, I learned that , If love comes to me again , I would like to do my best as much as I can.
>> correct
Thank you Teacher!
>> correct
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