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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
i have many friends who are always with me. but, when i have a problem and need to be consoled, i call a few of them who are good at talking with me.
>>>I have many friends who are always with me but when I have a problem and need to be consoled, I call a few of them who are good at talking with me.
>>>I have many friends who are always with me however, when I have a problem and I need to be consoled, I call a few of them who can give me good advice.
i don\'t care about what they do, how intelligent they are. it doesn\'t matter. i just want for my friends to be honest and kind. and if i\'m just with my friends, i want to feel happy.
>>> I don\'t care what they do and how intelligent they are. It doesn\'t matter. I just want my friends to be honest and kind. And, if I\'m with my friends, I want to feel happy.
friends are as important as my family and also girlfriend. i love my friends so much. since i met my friends, i have been with them happily.
>>>Friends are as important as my family and girlfriend. I love my friends so much. Since I met my friends, I have been with them happily.
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