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2018-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Hi Dianne. This is my homework today. <Describe a place you will never forget.> A place I will never forget is Managaha Island in Saipan. I went there 4years ago with my friends. I was very surprised because managaha beach was very clean and blue. There, I saw many kind of fishes like NIMO (an animation character). I went there again with my boyfriend because I was so touched by the color of the sea. But I disappointed because there were too many chinese. It was so noisy. Also I heard that very big thyphoon hit the island. I'm afraid the beautiful environment will be destroyed. I want to see agaion Managaha's beautiful beach again only without chinese.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Jane!


You\'re quite a traveler. ^^

I searched the place and it\'s really beautiful.

Hopefully, you\'ll be able to visit Managaha beach again. ^^

Thank you for sharing this.

Have a nice day!


_Teacher Dianne


Hi Dianne. 

>> correct
 This is my homework today.
>> correct
< Describe a place you will never forget.>
>> correct


 A place I will never forget is Managaha Island in Saipan.

>> correct
 I went there 4 years ago with my friends.

>> correct
 I was very surprised because Managaha beach was very clean and blue.

>> grammatically correct (capitalize the first letter Managaha)
 There, I saw many kind of fishes like NIMO (an animation character).

>> There, I saw many kinds of fishes like Nemo (an animation character).
 I went there again with my boyfriend because I was so touched by the color of the sea.

>> correct
 But I disappointed because there were too many chinese.

>> But I  was disappointed because there were too many Chinese.
 It was so noisy.

>> correct

>> or: They were so noisy.

 Also I heard that very big thyphoon hit the island. 

>> I also heard that a very big thyphoon hit the island.
 I\'m afraid the beautiful environment will be destroyed.

>> correct

 I want to see agaion Managaha\'s beautiful beach again only without chinese.

>>  I want to see Managaha\'s beautiful beach again only without Chinese.

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