Hi Teacher.
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강사 첨삭
Hi, Jane!
You\'re quite a traveler. ^^
I searched the place and it\'s really beautiful.
Hopefully, you\'ll be able to visit Managaha beach again. ^^
Thank you for sharing this.
Have a nice day!
_Teacher Dianne
Hi Dianne.
>> correct
This is my homework today.
>> correct
< Describe a place you will never forget.>
>> correct
A place I will never forget is Managaha Island in Saipan.
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I went there 4 years ago with my friends.
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I was very surprised because Managaha beach was very clean and blue.
>> grammatically correct (capitalize the first letter Managaha)
There, I saw many kind of fishes like NIMO (an animation character).
>> There, I saw many kinds of fishes like Nemo (an animation character).
I went there again with my boyfriend because I was so touched by the color of the sea.
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But I disappointed because there were too many chinese.
>> But I was disappointed because there were too many Chinese.
It was so noisy.
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>> or: They were so noisy.
Also I heard that very big thyphoon hit the island.
>> I also heard that a very big thyphoon hit the island.
I\'m afraid the beautiful environment will be destroyed.
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I want to see agaion Managaha\'s beautiful beach again only without chinese.
>> I want to see Managaha\'s beautiful beach again only without Chinese.
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