Hi teacher .
학생이 쓴 원문
1.I like mobile.
2.My aunt is kind to me. so she buy anything.
3.iI love my telephone. Because play game.
Diary:2019.7.30
we went to base ball graund. whenever i go baseball game. alwase lose. but today is win.
I was very happy. my team is at Defense.
My wish is play T-ball,and playd game with my firend
강사 첨삭
Hello there Herry!
How are you!
Thank you for doing your homework and making a diary!
I hope you enjoy your day!
See you in class!
1.I like mobile.
>>I like using my mobile.
2.My aunt is kind to me. so she buy anything.
>>CORRECT
>> She buys me anything.
3.iI love my telephone. Because play game.
>> I love my mobile phone because I can play some games.
Diary:2019.7.30
we went to base ball graund.
>> We went to the baseball field.
whenever i go baseball game. alwase lose. but today is win.
>>Whenever I play baseball I always lose but, today I won.
I was very happy.
>> CORRECT
my team is at Defense.
>> My team was the Defense.
My wish is play T-ball,and playd game with my firend
>> I want to play T-ball and other games with my friends.
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