Hi teacher

Hello Miss [이름]! Thank you for sending in your homework.  It is interesting to know that your family are truly dedicated campers. I hope that you could keep your camping as a part of your family tradition.s ~T.Dee

My family like to go camping.

>>CORRECT!

When we go camping, the most important to bring is many iced water bottles, some forks, some board games for spending time in night, my camera for taking a pictures and comfortable chairs.

>>When we go camping, the most important to things we bring are the following: bottles of iced water, some forks, some board games to use when we spend the night, my camera for taking a pictures and some comfortable chairs.

Last summer I felt have to go home when we drank all iced water bottles.

>>Last summer, I felt have to go home when we drank  the water.

A camping in summer was very difficult.

>>CORRECT!

My children like to eat a lot of porks.

>>My children like to eat a lot of meat.

But I don\'t need many porks, I want to need some wine.

>>But, in my case, I don\'t need plenty of meat, I  just want to have some wine.

Especially, I like to take pictures for my picture, because of it, we go to beautiful place.

>>I, particularly like to take pictures and  because of it we go to beautiful places.

And when I sit a comfortable chair with seeing good place, I can relax.

>>And when I sit on a comfortable chair while seeing a good view, I feel relaxed.