Hi teacher

How often do you eat out? Please give details in the next class. After I move to here, I ate out for lunch or dinner very often. The kind of cooking was very variety. It\'s because I teach at home so that I worried about smell of cooking, But whenever I eat out very often, I lose my appetite. I think that it\'s because the cooking was strong-tasting. Nowadays, I cook by myself for my family. When I see my family who eat a cooking tasty, I am so happy. We roast pork with Kimchy which received a gift from husband\'s friend. It was very tasty Yesterday. I recovered my appetite. The smell of cooking was not a problem to be well ventilated.

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Teacher ELLY.

Hi teacher,

How often do you eat out? Please give details in the next class.

After I move to here, I ate out for lunch or dinner very often.

>>After I moved here, I ate out for lunch or dinner very often.

The kind of cooking was very variety.

>>They cook a variety of food.

It\'s because I teach at home so that I worried about smell of cooking,

>>It\'s because I teach at home so I am worried about the smell of food.

But whenever I eat out very often, I lost my appetite.

>>But whenever I eat out very often, I always lose my appetite.

I think that it\'s because the cooking was strong-tasting.

>>I think that it\'s because the food had a strong taste.

Nowadays, I cook by myself for my family.

>>Nowadays, I cook for my family.

or>>I’m the only one cooking for my family these days.

When I see my family who eat a cooking tasty, I am so happy.

>>When I see my family eating some tasty food, I get so happy.

We roast pork with Kimchy which received a gift from husband\'s friend.

>>We roasted pork with Kimchi, which we received as a gift from my husband\'s friend.

It was very tasty Yesterday.

>>We had a very tasty meal yesterday.

I recovered my appetite.

CORRECT!

or>>I got my appetite back again.

The smell of cooking was not problem to be well ventilated.

>>The smell of cooking is not a problem if the house is well-ventilated.