Hi teacher .
학생이 쓴 원문
1.My brother\'s voice is very big
2.I went to 해운데 beach
3.I went to the mraket and buy a Shooting star ice cream
4.we beat the heat
5.temple is for Monkes
강사 첨삭
Hello Herry!
4.we beat the heat
5.temple is for Monkes
Thank you for doing your homework today!
I hope you enjoy your weekend!
See you next week!
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1.My brother\'s voice is very big
>>My brother has a big voice.
2.I went to 해운데 beach.
>>I went to Haeundae beach.
3.I went to the mraket and buy a Shooting star ice cream
>>I went to the market to buy some Shooting Star ice cream.
4.we beat the heat
>>We should beat the heat.
5.temple is for Monkes
>>The temple is for monks.
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