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2019-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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How do you choose the books you are going to read? I mostly choose books at library. My book is different depend on my interest. If I decide to choose some area, I bring out many simiar books. And I glance over the books. Especialy, I read who is the writer of books. I find out what I haven\\\'t know that. To choose books is very interesting.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss [이름]! I agree that choosing what book to read is indeed fun! Books are educational and entertaining at the same time. Keep reading!--T.Dee


I mostly choose books at library.

>>I mostly choose from books at the library.

My book is different depend on my interest.

>>My choice differs depending on my interest. 

If I decide to choose some area, I bring out many simiar books.

>>If I decide to choose from a section, I bring out many simiar books.

And I glance over the books.

>>And, I browse some books.

Especialy, I read who is the writer of books.

>>I give attention on who is the writer of book.

I find out what I haven\\\'t know that.

>>I find those books I haven\'t read before.

To choose books is very interesting.

>>Choosing what book to read is very interesting.

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