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Hello Miss [이름]! Any kind of pet would certainly be a good source of happiness among human being interested in having pets. It\'s never easy to keep them but pet owners would say that it is very rewarding. ~~T.Dee

Recently, many people in my around live with pets.

>>Recently, many people around me live with pets.

What kind of pets do you ask me? Bugs? or fishes? I think that you ask me \'Dog and Cat\'.

>>What kind of pet is it,  bugs, fishes? I think that you are referring to dogs and cats.

And my children also want to get breed this animals until my husband too.

>>My children wanted to keep pets and my husband too.

Although I have lived with many animals, I don\'t want to live with the animals.

 >>CORRECT!

When I see in my around, their old dog have been making big problems.

>>When I look  at my neighbors, I see that their old dog have been making big problems.

They told me \" Never breed the animals\".

>>CORRECT!

Because It is very difficult what we send them to heaven.

>>It\'s because, it is very difficult when we send them to heaven.

>>OR: It\'s because, it is not easy to let them go.

Their life is very short more than human being.

>>Their life is shorter than human beings.

But If people who is very lonely are, pets certainly will make them happy.

>>But if people who are very lonely, pets will certainly make them happy.

So I can say that pets are good for a person\'s psychological health

>>CORRECT!

>>This why, I can say that having pets can be beneficial to one\'s psychological health.