Hi teacher

2019-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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I care about what a restaurant looks like. Sometimes when I see a program introdusing a famous restaurant because of good taste, I want to go to the restaurant without to care look like. But I don\'t believe the program. I usually go to the same place depending on want to eat something. There are some good side menu changed everyday in the place. and clean. But I want to hang out for find out a new restaurant freely.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss [이름]! There are many factors we should consider when dining. There should be a balance in all the elements we are looking for. Let\'s make our dining experience always fun by choosing wisely.~~T.Dee


I care about what a restaurant looks like.

>>CORRECT!

Sometimes when I see a program introdusing a famous restaurant because of good taste, I want to go to the restaurant without to care look like.

>>Sometimes when I see a program introducing a famous restaurant because the food tastes good, I want to go to the restaurant without  any care of how it looks like.

But I don\'t believe the program.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: But, I don\'t always trust what they say.

 I usually go to the same place depending on want to eat something.

>> I usually go to the same place depending on what I want to eat.

There are some good side menu changed everyday in the place.

>>There are some good items on the  menu which can be changed everyday.

and clean.

>>And, the place is clean too.

But I want to hang out for find out a new restaurant freely.

>>But I want to hang out to find new restaurants on my own.

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