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The most interesting city to visit in my country is Jeju lisland.
>>The most interesting city to visit in my country is Jeju lsland.
Actually, another country are very similar. Seoul has all of thing to visit in korea.
>>Actually, other countries are very similar. Seoul has all the thing to visit in Korea.
Because it has a lot of culture places and new trendy buildings.
>>Because it has a lot of cultural places and new trendy buildings.
But Jeju lisland was very differrent.
>>But, Jeju lsland was very different.
First it made by volcanic ash so We can see stones of black and many palm trees.
>>Firstly, because it is made of volcanic ash we can black stones and many palm trees.
If we get on a ship in Jeju, we are able to visit another lisland.
>>If we get on a ship in Jeju, we are able to visit another island.
I recommand that you drink a coffee with big window and palm trees in a shop by the beach.
>>I recommend that you drink coffee overlooking from the big window and palm trees in a shop by the beach.
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