Hi Teacher~~^^

2019-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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I think that travelling is always good things for me. So traveling doesn\'t have bad things. Traveling has the good things are being able to forget everything about usual life. And it teach me how to make my life. World is very large and different from my country. It give me time thinking about life. If I have a chance which can go on a trip with my child, I want to go with them. Sometimes If I would had a chance traveling another country when I was a teenager, my life would had been changed. It is surely gave me speacial things different from reading books.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss [이름]! It\'s good to know that travelling has brought you nothing but great experiences. Keep travelling to enrich your perspective. Have a good day!~~T.Dee


I think that travelling is always good things for me. So traveling doesn\'t have bad things.

>>I think that travelling is always a good thing and it is never a bad thing.

Traveling has the good things are being able to forget everything about usual life.

>>The good thing about travelling is that we are able to forget everything about our usual life.

And it teach me how to make my life.

>>And, it teaches me how to live my life.

World is very large and different from my country. 

>>The world is very large and there are plenty of places which are different from my country. 

It give me time thinking about life.

>>It gives me time  to think about life.

If I have a chance which can go on a trip with my child, I want to go with them.

>>If I have a chance to travel with my child, I want to go with them.

Sometimes If I would had a chance traveling another country when I was a teenager, my life would had been changed.

>>Sometimes, if I had the chance to travel to another country when I was a teenager, my life would have changed

It is surely gave me speacial things different from reading books.

>>It surely gave me special experiences which are different from reading books.

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