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Hello Miss [이름]! It\'s good to know that travelling has brought you nothing but great experiences. Keep travelling to enrich your perspective. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
I think that travelling is always good things for me. So traveling doesn\'t have bad things.
>>I think that travelling is always a good thing and it is never a bad thing.
Traveling has the good things are being able to forget everything about usual life.
>>The good thing about travelling is that we are able to forget everything about our usual life.
And it teach me how to make my life.
>>And, it teaches me how to live my life.
World is very large and different from my country.
>>The world is very large and there are plenty of places which are different from my country.
It give me time thinking about life.
>>It gives me time to think about life.
If I have a chance which can go on a trip with my child, I want to go with them.
>>If I have a chance to travel with my child, I want to go with them.
Sometimes If I would had a chance traveling another country when I was a teenager, my life would had been changed.
>>Sometimes, if I had the chance to travel to another country when I was a teenager, my life would have changed
It is surely gave me speacial things different from reading books.
>>It surely gave me special experiences which are different from reading books.
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