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2019-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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What three adjectives best describe December are \'thankful\', \'Snowly\' and \'lovely\'. First, December is the last month in a year. So we have a time of thankful for our life in a year. And we also thank what Jesus born. Second, we expect that it is snowy. Sadly we couldn\'t see a write christmas. Third, we can see a lot of couples in the street. They seem to very happy. Whenever I see the couples, I feel very lovely.

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Hello Miss [이름]! The three words you have chosen are wonderful. They completely describe Christmas in Korea. It\'s truly lovely!--T.Dee 


What three adjectives best describe December are \'thankful\', \'Snowly\' and \'lovely\'.

>>The three adjectives that best describe December are \'thankful\', \'snowy\' and \'lovely\'.
First, December is the last month in a year. So we have a time of thankful for our life in a year.

>>Firstly, because December is the last month of the year, we have the chance to be thankful for our blessings in life for the year.

And we also thank what Jesus born.

>>And, we are also thankful that Jesus born.
Second, we expect that it is snowy.

>>Secondly, we expect that it will be snowy.

Sadly we couldn\'t see a write christmas.

>>Sadly we couldn\'t always have a white Christmas.
Third, we can see a lot of couples in the street.

>>Thirdly, we can see a lot of couples in the street.

They seem to very happy.

>>CORRECT!

Whenever I see the couples, I feel very lovely.

>>Whenever I see the couples, I think that they\'re very lovely.

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