Hi teacher .
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1.I have annual birthday
2.I played soccer in the field
3.My firend is athlete. So he is so fast
4.HI\'s body is athletic
5.I had a contest yester day
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Hello Herry!
Thank you for having classes with me this year!
I hope you have a peaceful new year!
See you next week!~
2.I played soccer in the field
3.My firend is athlete.
4.HI\'s body is athletic
5.I had a contest yester day
1.I have annual birthday
>>I have an annual birthday party.
2.I played soccer in the field
>>CORRECT
3.My firend is athlete.
>>My friend is an athlete.
So he is so fast
>> He is very fast.
4.HI\'s body is athletic
>> His body has an athletic build.
5.I had a contest yester day
>>I had a writing contest yesterday.
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