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Hello Miss [이름]! Living in another country is never easy. There are many things to consider and many adjustments to make. Those who dare to live in a foreign country are truly courageous. Not everyone can do it.

No, I wouldn\'t.

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Because I have a dream which teach my sons very great.

>>It\'s because I have a dream to teach my sons very well.

It start to teach in our daily life.

>>I start teaching them about our daily life.

I decided to give my son to God.

>> I decided to introduce God to my son.

Because of it, they have to learn how to thanks and keep pray in the church every sunday.

>>Because of it, they have to learn how to give thanks and keep pray in the church every Sunday.

Although it is important for go around world, what we have a belief in God is to start to listening to minister in church.

>>Although it is important to go around world, we should keep our relationship with God and it starts by listening to the minister in church.

Secondly, I like my job and study.

>>Secondly, I like my job and I like to study.

I want to be a great teacher who teach good well.

>>I want to be a great teacher who teaches well.

Thirdly, recently, even though we don\'t go abroad, we can see any country through on the internet.

>>Thirdly, even though we don\'t go abroad, we can see any country through the internet.

A lot of famous painters who move from their town have lived abroad.

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But they didn\'t live what they are always happy.

>> But they didn\'t always live happily.