Hi teacher~~~
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When you were a kid, what did you give your teachers to celebrate teacher\'s day?
When I was a kid, I bought a flower. And I put the flower on the desk in front of blackboard. There were many flowers in class. After grow up, when I was a high school, we saved the money for teacher\'s day. And we gave our teacher a flower and a present. And we sang a sing for teacher\'s day. At that time, we were very happy.
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Hi [이름],
Thanks for this response to the homework you were given. It reminds me of my elementary school days as well, and I could imagine the excitement that you and your classmates had during those times. ^^
-Rachel
When I was a kid, I bought a flower. And I put the flower on the desk in front of blackboard.
>> correct (in writing, it is better though to put the two sentences together)
There were many flowers in class.
>> correct
After grow up, when I was a high school, we saved the money for teacher\'s day.
>> When I was in high school, we saved money for teacher\'s day.
And we gave our teacher a flower and a present. And we sang a sing for teacher\'s day.
>> correct (we just say, we sang a song)
At that time, we were very happy.
>> correct
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