Hi teacher Amber.

2012-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Happy monday! Actually, I don't like monday, because my life's rhythm already is adopted to weekend's life; waking up late, doing something lazelly, killing time on the sofa like being couch potetoes.. I try to get a positive mind. Anyway, i think that describing a picture would be helpful for me. because i should use a new words and think creative ideas to explain the pictures. I expect for tomorrows photo. ^^ I have a question. We gave a homework last thursday, but i don't understand these homework. Could you explain one more plz? And I am answering today's homework. 1.b 2.d 3.b 4.d 5.a Have a good time with your familly and See you next class!

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thanks for making your homework today. Great job! Perfect! Anyway, I\'d like to remind you that you should capitalize the first singular pronoun, \"I\" and proper nouns like Monday and Thursday. Kindly check the corrections I made for you. Have a great night! T. Amber Happy monday! >> Happy Monday! Actually, I don\'t like monday, because my life\'s rhythm already is adopted to weekend\'s life; waking up late, doing something lazelly, killing time on the sofa like being couch potetoes.. >> Actually, I don\'t like Mondays because my life\'s rhythm has adopted to weekend\'s life; waking up late, doing something lazily, killing time on the sofa like being couch pototoes. I try to get a positive mind. >> I try to have a positive mind. Anyway, i think that describing a picture would be helpful for me. because i should use a new words and think creative ideas to explain the pictures. >> Anyway, I think that describing a picture would be helpful for me because I should use new words and think creative ideas to explain the pictures. I expect for tomorrows photo. ^^ >> I expect for tomorrow\'s photo. ^^ >> OR I expect for the picture tomorrow.I have a question. >> Correct! We gave a homework last thursday, but i don\'t understand these homework. >> You gave a homework last Thursday but I do not understand it. Could you explain one more plz? >> Could you explain to me once more please? And I am answering today\'s homework. >> Correct!1.b 2.d 3.b 4.d 5.a >> Correct! Have a good time with your familly and See you next class! >> Have a good time with your familly and see you on our next class!

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