hi! teacher chloe^^

2012-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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My homeworks are below.. A) 1)Place--> club. subject-->he time-->every friday verb-->goes 2)Adverb of frequency-->often place-->at school subject-->Emma time-->late verb-->arrives B) 1)What does Angela like for breakfast? 2)who broke the window? C) We had not lunch at school yesterday. ----------------------------------------------------------------- plese check my sentences~~ My name was from parents..But not sure.Before my mummy told me that my name was from aunt. My name means beauty and wisedom. So when i feel not good i often reminder my name. And then i feel refresh. Definitely! it sometimes define me. I'll introduce my family. All of my family are 6. Parents,brother,sister in law and nephew!! My father is retired. But now he is still working. And my mummy is housewife. My brother works at company. My sister in law has worked as a nurse. Nephew is 3 yeas old now. He is so tomboy.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [Name]! You almost perfect again your homework! Good job! Anyway Ma\'am, just keep up the progress okay? Oh! T[이름]k you Ma\'am for introducing your family to me. I really appreciate you for being a very wonderful person. You are so dear and so sweet to me Ma\'am. Hahaha! T[이름]k you very much. Anyway, I will call you again tomorrow.  Enjoy your day Ma\'am! I missed you! -Teacher Chloe My homeworks are below..A) 1)Place--> club. >>Correctsubject-->he>>Correct time-->every friday>>Correct verb-->goes >> Correct Answer: subject2)Adverb of frequency-->often >>Correctplace-->at school >>Correctsubject-->Emma >>Correcttime-->late >>Correctverb-->arrives >>Correct>> Correct Answer: place B) 1)What does Angela like for breakfast?>>Correct2)who broke the window?>>Who broke the window?C) We had not lunch at school yesterday.>>Correctplese check my sentences~~>>Please check my sentences.My name was from parents..But not sure.Before my mummy told me that my name was from aunt.>>My name was from my parents but I am not really sure about it. My mom told me before that my name was from my aunt. >>Correct >>My mom told me that they got my name from my aunt. My name means beauty and wisedom. >>Correct So when i feel not good i often reminder my name. And then i feel refresh.>>So, when I feel gloomy I always think of my name because it really makes me feel good.Definitely! it sometimes define me.>>Definitely! It sometimes defines me. >> Definitely! It sometimes defines me for what I really am.I\'ll introduce my family. >>Correct All of my family are 6. Parents,brother,sister in law and nephew!!>>We are six in our family. My father, mother, brother, sister in law, my nephew and me. My father is retired. >>Correct But now he is still working. >>But he have a current work. And my mummy is housewife.>>My mom is a housewife.My brother works at company. >>My brother is working in a company.  My sister in law has worked as a nurse.>>My sister-in-law is working as a nurse. >> My sister-in-law is nurse. Nephew is 3 yeas old now. >>My nephew is 3 year old now. He is so tomboy. >>Correct

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