Hi Teacher :D
학생이 쓴 원문
My new teacher :)
Did you enjoy your day?
I was waiting for your calling because I wanted to take our class.
Anyways, Let me introduce myself to you.
As you know, I'm [이름] and 25 years old but English age may be 23 years old. So, we are the same age, right? kk
But you are my teacher so I respect you.
And I'm live in Gwang Ju, South korea.
I have a father, mother and old sister.
And I'm attending at Chonnam National University.
I'm fourth grader.
Actully I was a bit nervous when we talked on the phone.
Because I took that class after a long time.
But you led to me to keep with my class.
Thank you for your help.
I thought you have lots of passion for teaching.
Anyways, I'm really hoping to have beneficial time hereafter.
Have a good night, sweet dreams.
강사 첨삭
Sweet dreams to you too, [이름]! Thanks for such a wonderful composition. We will talk more tomorrow in class, and I commend you for such a remarkable willingness to write and express your thoughts. Have a great night and see you! =)
Here are my corrections for you:
Kristel=)
My new teacher :)
>>> Correct
>>>OR: Hello, my new teacher =)Did you enjoy your day?
>>> CorrectI was waiting for your calling because I wanted to take our class.
>>> I was waiting for your call because I wanted to take our class.
Anyways, Let me introduce myself to you.
>>> Anyways, let me introduce myself to you.
As you know, I'm [이름] and 25 years old but English age may be 23 years old. So, we are the same age, right? Kk
>>> As you know, I'm [이름] and I’m 25 years old but my English (or international) age may be 23 years old.
So, we are the same age, right? Kk
>>> So, we are of the same age, right? Kk
But you are my teacher so I respect you.
>>> CorrectAnd I'm live in Gwang Ju, South korea.
>>> And I live in Gwang Ju, South korea.I have a father, mother and old sister.
>>> I have a father,a mother and an older sister.And I'm attending at Chonnam National University.
>>> And I'm attending school at Chonnam National University.I'm fourth grader.
>>> I’m a senior.Actully I was a bit nervous when we talked on the phone.
>>> Correct; just the spelling of ActuallyBecause I took that class after a long time.
>>> Because I took that class after a long time of studying English.But you led to me to keep with my class.
>>> But you led to me to keep pace with my class.Thank you for your help.
>>> CorrectI thought you have lots of passion for teaching.
>>> I think you have lots of passion for teaching.Anyways, I'm really hoping to have beneficial time hereafter.
>>> Anyways, I'm really hoping to have a productive time hereafter.Have a good night, sweet dreams.
>>> Correct
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