Hi Teacher :D

2011-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Julie

학생이 쓴 원문

My new teacher :) Did you enjoy your day? I was waiting for your calling because I wanted to take our class. Anyways, Let me introduce myself to you. As you know, I'm [이름] and 25 years old but English age may be 23 years old. So, we are the same age, right? kk But you are my teacher so I respect you. And I'm live in Gwang Ju, South korea. I have a father, mother and old sister. And I'm attending at Chonnam National University. I'm fourth grader. Actully I was a bit nervous when we talked on the phone. Because I took that class after a long time. But you led to me to keep with my class. Thank you for your help. I thought you have lots of passion for teaching. Anyways, I'm really hoping to have beneficial time hereafter. Have a good night, sweet dreams.

강사 첨삭

Sweet dreams to you too, [이름]! Thanks for such a wonderful composition.  We will talk more tomorrow in class, and I commend you for such a remarkable willingness to write and express your thoughts. Have a great night and see you! =) Here are my corrections for you: Kristel=) My new teacher :) >>> Correct >>>OR: Hello, my new teacher =)Did you enjoy your day? >>> CorrectI was waiting for your calling because I wanted to take our class. >>> I was waiting for your call because I wanted to take our class. Anyways, Let me introduce myself to you. >>> Anyways, let me introduce myself to you. As you know, I'm [이름] and 25 years old but English age may be 23 years old. So, we are the same age, right? Kk >>> As you know, I'm [이름] and I’m 25 years old but my English (or international) age may be 23 years old. So, we are the same age, right? Kk >>> So, we are of the same age, right? Kk But you are my teacher so I respect you. >>> CorrectAnd I'm live in Gwang Ju, South korea. >>> And I live in Gwang Ju, South korea.I have a father, mother and old sister. >>> I have a father,a  mother and an older  sister.And I'm attending at Chonnam National University. >>> And I'm attending school at Chonnam National University.I'm fourth grader. >>> I’m a senior.Actully I was a bit nervous when we talked on the phone. >>> Correct; just the spelling of ActuallyBecause I took that class after a long time. >>> Because I took that class after a long time of studying English.But you led to me to keep with my class. >>> But you led to me to keep pace with my class.Thank you for your help. >>> CorrectI thought you have lots of passion for teaching. >>> I think you have lots of passion for teaching.Anyways, I'm really hoping to have beneficial time hereafter. >>> Anyways, I'm really hoping to have a productive time hereafter.Have a good night, sweet dreams. >>> Correct

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