hi teacher Dianne.

2018-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Hi, It's very nice to having you. Sometimes I frustrated because I can't express myself in English well. So I need your help. Maybe you are irritated because my English is not good. But I'm gonna try to be fluent in English. :) And this is my homework today. 1. My friend is a photographer. Let’s ask him for an advice. 2. We had a fish and a chips for X lunch. 3. That doesn’t sound X very interesting lunch. 4. I had a very bad night. 5. I didn’t sleep a wink. Take care!!!

강사 첨삭

Hi, Jane!


I appreciate your effort in doing your first homework with me. ^^

Articles are sometimes confusing, right?

Don\'t worry, you\'re going to learn how to use them as we go along with the class.

Have a great day ahead!


_Teacher Dianne


Hi, It\'s very nice to having you.

>> correct (Same here ^^)

>> Or: Hi, It\'s very nice meeting you. 
 Sometimes I frustrated because I can\'t express myself in English well.

>> Sometimes I feel frustrated because I can\'t express myself in English well.
 So I need your help. Maybe you are irritated because my English is not good.

>> correct

But I\'m gonna try to be fluent in English. :)

>> But I\'m going to try my best to be fluent in English. :) (That\'s my positive girl ^^)

 And this is my homework today.

>> correct 

 1. My friend is a photographer. Let’s ask him for an advice.

>> a/x (Advice here is general. It means, we don\'t need an article. Also, it is a mass noun, that is, it has no plural.)
 2. We had a fish and a chips for X lunch.

>> x/x/x (Fish is the most common plural form of \"fish\" unless you\'re writing or talking about different species of fish.)
 3. That doesn’t sound X very interesting lunch.

>>  a
 4. I had a very bad night.

>> correct
 5. I didn’t sleep a wink. 

>> correct

 Take care!!!

>> correct

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