Hi, teacher Grace!
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Please check your homework below!
The good thing about having a big brother or sister is having a mentor in life.
>> Correct!
Especially when we are young, big brother or sister takes care of our younger brother a lot.
>> Especially when you are young, big brothers or sisters can take care their younger brother or sister a lot.
The worst thing of having a big brother or sister is to interfere with his brother forever.
>> The worst thing of having a big brother or sister is they will stand in the way of their younger brother or sister forever.
Especially, when we are young, big brothers or sisters sometimes hit our younger brother.
>>> Especially, when you are still young, big brothers or sisters sometimes they are hitting their siblings.
In our country, we live with a very big brother in the north.
>> In our country, we are living with our big brothers
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