hi teacher! it's e-mail to send my mexican friend
학생이 쓴 원문
primo! it's me. i'm hye jin kk
i'm anxious to arrived your home safe
i heard you told alex that you miss me a lot
kk thank you for saying
actually i miss u too. so i can't sleep kkkk
i think you are so very kind
cause i couldn't almost hear your saying but you make me laugh alway
thank you so much
and i heard sorry if you made something bad to me
but i'm ok i think it is just my issue(problem?)
don't worried about it
anyway i have a good memory, do you think so?
umm..
do you remember "8" in korea?
kkk do you still "babo"? kkk
anyway i miss you
i will be waiting for you
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!! Take you so much for passing a composition. I can tell that you are good at expressing your thoughts, though your need to be very careful with your sentence contsructuion. Also, always remember that you need to start your sentence with a big letter. Kindly check on the corrections that I made. Always take care.
Lei J
primo! it's me. i'm hye jin kk>>correct
>>Primo!! It뭩 me Hye Jin.
i'm anxious to arrived your home safe>>I뭢 anxious and wondering if you arrived in your home safely.
i heard you told alex that you miss me a lot>>correct
kk thank you for saying>>Thank you for that.
Actually i miss u too. so i can't sleep kkkk >>correct
i think you are so very kind>>I think you are very kind.
cause i couldn't almost hear your saying but you make me laugh alway>>Even if I almost couldn뭪 hear what you are saying you always make me laugh.
Thank you so much>>correct
And i heard sorry if you made something bad to me>>And you don뭪 hesitate to say sorry when you did something wrong.
but i'm ok i think it is just my issue(problem?) >>But I am okay, I think the problem/isuue is with me.
don't worried about it>>Don뭪 worry about it.
anyway i have a good memory, do you think so?>>Anyways, don뭪 you think that I have a good memory?
umm..>>correct
do you remember "8" in korea?>>Do you still remember what뭩 number
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