hi teacher it'S MY HOMEWORK!!
학생이 쓴 원문
1)HAVE
2)HAS
3)HAVE
4)HAVE
5)HAVE
Rcently my parents thaught that i get a mariage.Because having a sweet home is very important to my life. And when i don't have a good friend i don't need to worry. If i have friend not so much, just concentrate this moments and enjoy my hoobby.
we often have a joyful time with my brother and sister in law.
when we get together we usaully go to restaurant and trip.And go to movie theather, and sometimes see a musical.It was good memory and we should carry on.
most of all are same. now we got a new member of family. This is my nephew. So we went a teddler book store and park for kid.
Last in february we went a jejudo which is korea beatiful island. Because The day was my mom's 60th birthday. So we had a good time in rijot. And we climbed the famouse mountain and ride a horse and saw a beautiful see. And we tasted special food of jejudo.
that was a interesting and good trip with my family.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [Name]! Wow! You almost perfect your homework Ma\'am. EXCELLENT! Oh I really appreciate your effort Ma\'am making compositions. I am really getting to know you better! I am very happy for you Ma\'am because you have a very happy family. I just remembered my family. I think I am already missing them. How I wish I could have a wonderful time with them again very soon. Haha! Anyway Ma\'am, I will call you again tomorrow. Have a good night! Enjoy your Friday!
-Teacher Chloe
1)HAVE
>>Correct
>>They have got a goldfish.2)HAS
>>Correct
>>Emma has got lots of friends.3)HAVE
>>Correct4)HAVE
>>Correct5)HAVE>>The family has got two cars.Rcently my parents thaught that i get a mariage.
>>Recently, my parents told me that I have to get married.
Because having a sweet home is very important to my life.
>>They told me that having a family is very important to me.
>>They told me that it is very important to have my own family.
And when i don\'t have a good friend i don\'t need to worry.
>>But I think I don't have to worry if I have a good friend.
>>But I think I don't have to worry if I have a lot of friends.
If i have friend not so much, just concentrate this moments and enjoy my hoobby.>>In the other [이름]d, I will just concentrate enjoying the moments that I have in life.we often have a joyful time with my brother and sister in law.>>I often have a joyful time with my brother and my sister-in-law.
>>I often have a joyful time with my family members.
>> I often have a joyful time with my family.when we get together we usaully go to restaurant and trip.
>>We usually go to a restaurant and have some fun.
And go to movie theather, and sometimes see a musical.It was good memory and we should carry on.>>We sometimes see a movie in the cinema or see a musical. It is really a good memory that we should carry on and always remember. most of all are same.
>>Almost all of us share the same interests and likes in life.
now we got a new member of family.
>>Now, we got a new member of the family.
This is my nephew.
>>It is my nephew.
So we went a teddler book store and park for kid.>>We went to the park and in the toddler book store one time because of him.Last in february we went a jejudo which is korea beatiful island.
>>Last February, we went to Jejudo a very beautiful island in Korea.
Because The day was my mom\'s 60th birthday.
>>It was my mom's 60th birthday.
So we had a good time in rijot.
>>Correct>>So we really had a very good time there.
And we climbed the famouse mountain and ride a horse and saw a beautiful see.
>>Moreover, we climbed the famous mountain and we rode a horse. We saw beautiful sceneries.
And we tasted special food of jejudo.
>>Also, we tasted special food in the place. that was a interesting and good trip with my family.
>>It was a very interesting and exciting trip we had.
>>It was a very interesting and exciting trip I had with my family.
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