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My goals are for learning English to get a high score in ielts test. And i want to teach for students well. Lately i love to learning English evevn though i can speak English some. Forethermore i hope to write in English well. Transportation In seoul our common transportation are clean subway,bus and taxi. In my case i usually use a subway and bus. when i am busy i sometimes take a taxi. The most comfortable form of transportation is subway i think. Because it is so fast and safe. Of course traffic jam is very common in seoul. Particullary at rush time. Nowdays people have a their own car. But people still use a public vehicles.

Hi Winnie  I really admire your willingness to learn and develop more of your English skills. As your English coach, I will help you in all the best ways I can. Just keep on believing in yourself that you can make it. It will be very difficult at first but you will get better in time. Take care and talk to you soon then. Teacher Lara Here are my corrections for you: My goals are for learning English to get a high score in ielts test.>> My goal is learning English in order to get a high score in IELTS test.And i want to teach for students well.>> And I want to teach students well.Lately i love to learning English evevn though i can speak English some.>> Lately, I learned to love English even though I can only speak enough. Forethermore i hope to write in English well.>> Furthermore, I hope I could write well in English.Transportation>> CorrectIn seoul our common transportation are clean subway,bus and taxi.>> In Seoul, our common transportations are clean subways, bus and taxi.In my case i usually use a subway and bus. when i am busy i sometimes take a taxi.>> In my case, I usually use the subway and bus. If I am busy then I sometimes take a taxi.The most comfortable form of transportation is subway i think. Because it is so fast and safe.>> The most comfortable form of transportation is the subway, I think, because it is so fast and safe.Of course traffic jam is very common in seoul. Particullary at rush time.>> of course traffic jam is very common in Seoul particularly during the rush hour.Nowdays people have a their own car. But people still use a public vehicles. >> Correct