Hi, teacher. It\'s my homework.
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I like hollywood movie.
Because It\'s funny.
Especially, I like fantasy movie such as Harry Potter, Jumanji and so on.
Fantasy movie allow imaginable.
The imagination is so fun and interesting.
Also, That is releasing stress.
Have a nice day.^^
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1. I like hollywood movie.
>>I like Hollywood movies.
2. Because It\'s funny.
>>Because it\'s funny.
3. Especially, I like fantasy movie such as Harry Potter, Jumanji and so on.
>>Especially, I like fantasy movies such as Harry Potter, Jumanji and so on.
4. Fantasy movie allow imaginable.
>>Fantasy movies allow me to imagine.
5. The imagination is so fun and interesting.
>>CORRECT
OR>>It makes me imagine fun and interesting things.
6. Also, That is releasing stress.
>>Also, it relieves stress.
I agree.
Nice sentences.
- T. Melody ^^
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