Hi, teacher. It\'s my homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have many money, first, I will build building.
Because If building rent, appear fixed income keep on.
Seconds, I will help difficult neighborhood.
Because I am a christian.
I have heaven the gospel.
That is good things.
Third, I have to things.
I need long time.^^
강사 첨삭
1. If I have many money, first, I will build building.
2. Because If building rent, appear fixed income keep on.
3. Seconds, I will help difficult neighborhood.
4. Because I am a christian.
5. I have heaven the gospel.
6. That is good things.
7. Third, I have to things.
>>If I have a lot of money, first, I will build a building.
>>Because having a building for rent gives me a fixed income.
>>Second, I will help struggling neighborhood.
>>Because I am a Christian.
>>I believe in the gospel.
>>That is a god thing.
>>Third, I have to do things.
8. I need long time.
>>I need a long time for it.
Good.
- T.Melody ^^
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