Hi :) Teacher Kelly! Would you check this paragragh?

1. This car belonged to my grandfather. a) of b) to c) for d) in 2. The salary depends on the level of intellectuality. a) of b) with c) in d) on 3. Eva likes apples but she's not very keen on pears. a.) of b) to c) into d) on 4. My friend is not interested in politics. a) in b) with c) to d) by 5. Congratulations on your award. You deserve it. a) with b) after c) on d) for I don't agree that the university should decide that students will no longer be able to wear mini skirts on campus for three reasons. First, wearing mini skirts is student's freedom. They are no longer middle and high school students who are regulated by teachers. University students are adults and have rights to wear any cloth they want. They also want to show their unique clothing style. Second, wearing mini skirts gives us a cooling feel. Of course, they can wear short pants. But,sometimes, they feel like to wear mini skirts. Finally, Young women want to appeal to men by wearing mini skirts. And it is only suitable for young women to wear mini skirts. Do you think that 80 years old women who are wearing mini skirts are going with her? Therefore, they are allowed to wear mini skirts on campus, too. I want to emphasize since they are adluts, they can wear any cloth including mini skirts. And no one can ban it.

Hello Melissa! Here\'s the correction for your composition. If you have further questions or clarifications, feel free to ask me during the class. Enjoy your day!

-t. KELLY-

1. This car belonged to my grandfather.

a) of b) to c) for d) in
>> Correct.
2. The salary depends on the level of intellectuality.
a) of b) with c) in d) on
>> Correct.
3. Eva likes apples but she\'s not very keen on pears.
a.) of b) to c) into d) on
>> Correct.
4. My friend is not interested in politics.
a) in b) with c) to d) by
>> Correct.
5. Congratulations on your award. You deserve it.
a) with b) after c) on d) for
>> Correct.

 I don\'t agree that the university should decide that students will no longer be able to wear mini skirts on campus for three reasons. 

>>  I don\'t agree that the university should decide whether students will no longer wear mini skirts on campus for three reasons.

First, wearing mini skirts is student\'s freedom.

>>  Firstly, wearing mini skirts is student\'s freedom.

They are no longer middle and high school students who are regulated by teachers.

>> They are no longer middle school and high school students who are regulated by teachers.

University students are adults and have rights to wear any cloth they want.

>> Correct.

They also want to show their unique clothing style.

>> Correct.

Second, wearing mini skirts gives us a cooling feel.

>>  Secondly, wearing mini skirts give us a cool feeing.

Of course, they can wear short pants.

>> Correct.

But, sometimes, they feel like to wear mini skirts.

>> But, sometimes, they feel like wearing mini skirts.

Finally, Young women want to appeal to men by wearing mini skirts.

>>  Finally, Young women want to appeal attractive to men by wearing mini skirts.

And it is only suitable for young women to wear mini skirts.

>> Correct.

Do you think that 80 years old women who are wearing mini skirts are going with her?

>> Do you think think that 80 years old women will look good in mini skirts?

Therefore, they are allowed to wear mini skirts on campus, too.

>> Correct.

I want to emphasize since they are adults, they can wear any cloth including mini skirts. 

>>  I want to emphasize the fact that since they are adults, they can wear any cloth including mini skirts. 

And no one can ban it.

>> Correct.