hi teacher Lala^^
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2.the cry baby at the night
3.the sun rise in the east
4.she eats carrots for breakfast
5.she always worries about her children
6.he brush his teeth after breakfast
7.the students speak English in the classroom
8.she carries the MP3 player all the time
9.A lawyer defend people in troble
10.Mary enjoys listening to classical music
Restaurant
My favorite restaurant is a korean restaurants. Because it's proper to me.
Full service dining is focused on fresh food and good atmosphere.
They have a bulgogi and kimchi, etc. That is a one of the famous korean food.
Nowdays Korean dish has c[이름]ged a lot. For example, They want glove dishes. So they often went another country restaurants.
Fresh food is healthier t[이름] canned food. The canned food add chemical ingredients and it is easy to eat and cook.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!! Good job. I admire your point of view in this topic. I hope you\'ll continue exploring your skills in the world of English. c\",) May you have a weekend ahead. Take care and talk to you soon then.
T.Lara
Here are my corrections for you:
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>> A mec[이름]ic fix cars.2.the cry baby at the night
>> The baby cry at night.3.the sun rise in the east
>> The sun rise in the east. (Reminder: Capitalize the first letter of the first word of a sentence)4.she eats carrots for breakfast
>> She eats carrots for breakfast. (Reminder: Capitalize the first letter of the first word of a sentence)5.she always worries about her children
>> She always worries about her children. (Reminder: Capitalize the first letter of the first word of a sentence)6.he brush his teeth after breakfast
>> He brush his teeth after breakfast. (Reminder: Capitalize the first letter of the first word of a sentence)7.the students speak English in the classroom
>> The students speak English in the classroom. (Reminder: Capitalize the first letter of the first word of a sentence)8.she carries the MP3 player all the time
>> She carries a MP3 player all the time. (Reminder: Capitalize the first letter of the first word of a sentence)9.A lawyer defend people in troble
>> A lawyer defebd people in trouble.10.Mary enjoys listening to classical music>> CorrectRestaurant>> CorrectMy favorite restaurant is a korean restaurants. Because it\'s proper to me.>> My favorite restaurant is Korean because it suits me.Full service dining is focused on fresh food and good atmosphere.>> Full dining service focuses on serving fresh food and with good atmosphere.They have a bulgogi and kimchi, etc. That is a one of the famous korean food.>> They have bulgogi, kimchi, etc. and these are just few famous food in Korea.Nowadays Korean dish has c[이름]ged a lot.
>> Correct
For example, They want glove dishes. So they often went another country restaurants.>> For example, if they want to eat glove dishes they often go to foreign restaurants.Fresh food is healthier t[이름] canned food.
>> Correct
The canned food add chemical ingredients and it is easy to eat and cook.
>> They add chemical ingrediets in canned foods and it is easy to eat and cook.
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