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2012-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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1.slow 2.beautifully 3.quickly 4.loudly 5.good 6.awfully Hobby My hobbies are doing Yo-ga,travelling,reading books and drawing pictures which can send friends as a present,going to good restaurants,waching films and enjoing performances. For example, i've drew pictures for 9 years. Yo-ga as well. In my case, i enjoy doing Yo-ga about 25 minutes in every morning. Of course! Particulary keeping a pet is a quite interesting hobby. It depends on. Pesonally my hobbies don't cost too much time except travelling. Yes, if i have a teamwork it will be more excited.

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Hi Winnie  Your perseverance will take you anywhere you want to go. Keep striving to be the best in everything and surely everything will be rewarded in due time. T. Lara Here are my corrections for you: 1.slow >> Correct2.beautifully >> Correct3.quickly >> Correct4.loudly >> Correct5.good >> Correct6.awfully>> CorrectHobby>> CorrectMy hobbies are doing Yo-ga,travelling,reading books and drawing pictures which can send friends as a present,going to good restaurants,waching films and enjoing performances.>> My hobbies are doing yoga, reading books, drawing pictures which I can send to my friends as gifts, going to good restaurants, watching films and enjoying performances.For example, i\'ve drew pictures for 9 years. Yo-ga as well.>> For example, I\'ve been drawing pictures for 9 years and same as doing yoga.In my case, i enjoy doing Yo-ga about 25 minutes in every morning.>> CorrectOf course! Particulary keeping a pet is a quite interesting hobby.>> Of course! Basically, keeping a pet is quite an interesting hobby.It depends on. >> It depends on the matter. Pesonally my hobbies don\'t cost too much time except travelling.>> CorrectYes, if i have a teamwork it will be more excited. >> Yes, if there\'s a teamwork it will become more exciting.

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