Hi! teacher Lala ~ it's my homework^^
학생이 쓴 원문
1.consideration
2.thoughts
3.mind
4.thought
5.mind
Foreign Country
It is located in Europe area.
I'm not sure.But I will try to go there.
Most of all i hope to learning English more and i want to leave fantastic memories in my life.
Tourism is very important because it brings huge income and benefits.
Korean social is considered about tourism development. Some korea people published a personal guide book. And travel company has planed about new good places.
Also goverment recommend nice korea places on TV.
Yes, tourism has c[이름]ged over the past few years. Korea people like to go nice places. So
a tourism copotation developed new tour area in Korea and goverment invest good tourism facilites.
강사 첨삭
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T. Lara
1.consideration
>>a. mind2.thoughts
>>d. issue3.mind
>>Correct!
4.thought
>>Correct!5.mind
>>Correct!Foreign Country>>I want to go to a foreign country.It is located in Europe area.>>It is located in the Europe area.I\'m not sure.But I will try to go there.>>I\'m not sure but I will try to go there.Most of all i hope to learning English more and i want to leave fantastic memories in my life.>>Most of all, I hope to learn English more and I want to have fantastic memories in my life.Tourism is very important because it brings huge income and benefits.>>Correct!Korean social is considered about tourism development.
>>Korean culture is considered in tourism development.
>>Korean societies are considered in tourism development.
>>Korean socialization is considered in tourism development.
Some korea people published a personal guide book.
>>Some Korean people published a personal guide book.
And travel company has planed about new good places.
>>And travel companies have planned about new good places.Also goverment recommend nice korea places on TV.>>Also, the government recommended nice Korean places on TV.Yes, tourism has c[이름]ged over the past few years.
>>Correct!
Korea people like to go nice places.
>>Korean people like to go to nice places.
So a tourism copotation developed new tour area in Korea and goverment invest good tourism facilites.
>>So the tourism department developed new tour areas in Korea and the government invests good tourism facilities.
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