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Currently i get a new job that is a junior class English teacher in Korea. It is not related on my major in University. Because i became to like English in London. For me, i'd like to get a interesting at workplace. Of course i need a high salary. If it is possible, i'd like to get good opportunities. For example, going to abroad, [이름]ting good persons and blessing welfare facilities. i thinks salary is important.If i am God, i don't need a salary... I would make a new class in my worke place or extend the work time. l am from south korea. I live in seoul. Seoul is a capital of korea. It has a lot of good hotels, traditional places, departments, clean and fast subway, good restaurants and so on... The main place of my hometown is a park. People can relax in there and enjoy a famouse concert and foreign performances. 20 years ago, here was a lot of normal house, school, hospital and small factories.

Hi Winnie  T[이름]k you for this composition. I hope you\'re enjoying our classes as much as I do. Just continue to send me compositions, I\'d love to hear from you. See you in class! Teacher Lara Here are my corrections for you: Currently i get a new job that is a junior class English teacher in Korea.>> I currently got a new job as an English teacher in a junior class in Korea.It is not related on my major in University.>> It is not related to my major in university.Because i became to like English in London.>> Because I came to like English when I was in London.For me, i\'d like to get a interesting at workplace. Of course i need a high salary.>> For me, I\'d like to be in an interesting workplace but of course I need a high salary. If it is possible, i\'d like to get good opportunities. For example, going to abroad,>> If it\'s possible I\'d like to get good opportunities like going abroad.[이름]ting good persons and blessing welfare facilities.>> [이름]ting good people and (what do you mean by blessing welfare facilities?)i thinks salary is important.If i am God, i don\'t need a salary...>> I think earning a salary is important. If I am [Name] then I don\'t need a salary.I would make a new class in my worke place or extend the work time.>> I would add new classes at my workplace or even extend the working time.l am from south korea. I live in seoul. Seoul is a capital of korea. >> I am from South Korea. I live in Seoul. Seoul is the capital city of Korea. It has a lot of good hotels, traditional places, departments, clean and fast subway, good restaurants and so on...>> CorrectThe main place of my hometown is a park. People can relax in there and enjoy a famouse concert and foreign performances.>> The main attraction of my hometown is a park. People can relax there and enjoy a famous concert and foreign performances.20 years ago, here was a lot of normal house, school, hospital and small factories. >>  There were a lot of normal houses, schools, hospitals and small factories 20 years ago.