Hi teacher michelle!

2012-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hihihihih~ In my case, I just love to eating! I like taste delicious food!! it means, there is no rogical reason. just instinct~ So, I like eating where such a good restaurant, and I like eating mading home too. but, sometimes my prefer way was diffrent. If I feel very very tired than I prefer deliveried food (like pizza, chiken) If I very very hungry than I want just eating except eating where expensive restaurant. If I want eat korean food, than I made my hand. kiki. reataurant? NO. N-E-V-E-R go ther. (If I get free tiket than I will go.) because I know How difficult earn money is.... So I don't go ther. ------------------------- Today! the A came here! we talked few [이름]uate. because I was bussy ㅜㅜ. I will tell you tomorrow. :D See you~

강사 첨삭

Hello Su [이름]! Thank you for sending me your homework. Review my corrections and continue practicing. Take care! Teacher Michelle   Hihihihih~ In my case, I just love to eating! >> In my case, I just love to eat!I like taste delicious food!! >> I like to taste delicious foods!!it means, there is no rogical reason. just instinct~ >> It means that there is no logical reason, just my instinct. So, I like eating where such a good restaurant, and I like eating mading home too. >> So Iike to eat in a good restaurant and I also like to eat foods made at home.but, sometimes my prefer way was diffrent. >> But sometimes my preferences would differ.If I feel very very tired than I prefer deliveried food(like pizza, chiken) >> If I feel tired then I would prefer my food to be delivered like pizza or chicken.If I very very hungry than I want just eating except eating where expensive restaurant. >> If I\'m very hungry then I would just eat anywhere, except in an expensive restaurant.If I want eat korean food, than I made my hand. kiki. >> If I want Koreaan food, then I just cook by myself.reataurant? NO. N-E-V-E-R go ther. >> Restaurant? No, I never go there.(If I get free tiket than I will go.) >> If I get a free ticket, then I will go.because I know How difficult earn money is.... So I don\'t go ther. >> Because I know how difficult it is to earn money, so I don\'t go there. -------------------------Today! the A came here! >> Today, A came!we talked few [이름]uate. because I was bussy ㅜㅜ. >> We talked for a few [이름]utes because I was busy.I will tell you tomorrow. :D >> Correct!See you~ >> See you!  

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