Hi teacher Ritchel!

2011-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Guess what! I saw you picture finally!! yay!! ^^I'm really sorry to say that but I forgot your name again. :(So I couldn't see your picture yesterday. But today I found out your name is in here on my class result page! So luckily I got you! By the way I am at work as usual now. and now it's 8:30am.Before I came to the office I went to the gym to take a shower.Actually i try to work out as much as I can. But somethime I'm lazy or feel like iI will be busy. Because of that just taking a shower and just rush to work. and i got a scratch. i was kind of rush and didn't find out there is something out on the chair. sad :( But it's not a big one so I'm okay! At the moment i wont to make some composement and get some feedback from you. I think i am going to go now!! see you today again!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Nice to hear from you. No problem I can check your composition during my free time so feel free to send some.

- Teacher Ritchel -

 

Guess what! I saw you picture finally!! yay!! ^^

>> Guess what?I finally saw your picture!Yehey!

I'm really sorry to say that but I forgot your name again. :(

>>I'm really sorry but I forgot your name again.

So I couldn't see your picture yesterday.

>>That's why I wasn't able to check your picture yesterday.

But today I found out your name is in here on my class result page!

>> I found your name in my class result page!

So luckily I got you!

>>I'm so lucky I got you as a teacher.

By the way I am at work as usual now. and now it's 8:30am.

>>By the way, I'm at work now as usual. It's already 8:30am.

Before I came to the office I went to the gym to take a shower.

>>Before going to the office, I went to the gym to take a shower.

Actually i try to work out as much as I can.

>>I'm actually trying to work out as often as I can.
But somethime I'm lazy or feel like iI will be busy.

>>When I feel lazy or I will be very busy I don't go to the gymn.
Because of that just taking a shower and just rush to work.

>>So I end up just taking a shower and rushing to go work.
and i got a scratch.

>> I got some scratch.

i was kind of rush and didn't find out there is something out on the chair. sad :(

>>I was rushing and didn't notice that there was somwthing on the chair. I feel sad.
But it's not a big one so I'm okay!

>>It's not a big one though, so I'm okay!
At the moment i wont to make some composement and get some feedback from you.

>>I want to make some composition and get some feedback from you.
I think i am going to go now!!

>>I think I should go now.

see you today again!

>> See you later.

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