Hi, teacher. This is my homework.
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Answer: My things famous persin in so-hyang.
She is a singer.
She is beautiful and be a good song.
Also, she is good in high pitched tones.
High pitched tones is Key skills hers.
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1. My things famous persin in so-hyang.
2. She is a singer.
3. She is beautiful and be a good song.
4. Also, she is good in high pitched tones.
>>The person I really admire is So Hyang.
>CORRECT
OR>>She\'s a good singer.
>>She is beautiful and sings very well.
>>Also, she has high pitched tone.
5. High pitched tones is Key skills hers.
>>This is her key skill in singing.
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