Hi. Teacher Verna.

2011-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

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Hi.Teacher Verna. I'm sorry, my phone run out of bateery. and I want to chang time tomorrow class. because I will go to interview at 11:30am. so I can do 10:10am~11:00am or 13:00pm~17:00. how?

강사 첨삭

Hello!

You did a good job in writing this composition. I noticed a few mistakes related to your capitalization. The best way to deal with this is to contact our manager so that you can make your arrangements with the schedule. Have a nice day!

T. Verna.

Hi.Teacher Verna.

>>Correct

OR>>
I'm sorry, my phone run out of bateery.
>> I'm sorry, my phone run out of batery.
and I want to chang time tomorrow class.
>> And I want to change the time of tomorrow뭩 class.
because I will go to interview at 11:30am.
>> Because I will go to an interview at 11:30am.
so I can do 10:10am~11:00am or 13:00pm~17:00.
>> So I can have class at 10:10am~11:00am or 13:00pm~17:00.
how?

>>How will I do this?

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