Hi^^ teacner it's my homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1)mind
2)thought
3)thoughts
4)consideration
5)decision
Book
I like to read books which give me a wisedom and positive thoughts.
Lately i've read 'throw a bad thoughts' by japanese Buddhist priest.
lt is about having a peace and happiness of life.
I would like to get on well with my family and friend. Also i want to be have good c[이름]ces.
I thinks between reading and compter is give me a lots of information t[이름] before.
In Korea, 'justice' is popular books.
강사 첨삭
Hi Winnie Be very careful with your capitalization again. Make sure that you capitalized the first letter of a word especially if the word is a proper noun such as: Japanese, I have (I\'ve), capitalize the title of a book, etc. Please keep this in mind. Tale care and I\'ll talk to you soon then.
Teacher Lara
Here are my corrections for you:
1)mind
>> Correct2)thought
>> issue3)thoughts
>> mind4)consideration
>> thought5)decision>> mindBook>> CorrectI like to read books which give me a wisedom and positive thoughts.
>> I like to read books which give me wisdom and positive thoughts.Lately i\'ve read \'throw a bad thoughts\' by japanese Buddhist priest.>> Lately, I\'ve read \"Throw a Bad thoughts\" by a Japanese Buddhist priest.lt is about having a peace and happiness of life. >> It is about having a peace and happiness in life.I would like to get on well with my family and friend. Also i want to be have good c[이름]ces.>> I would like to get along well with my family and friends. I also want to have good c[이름]ces.I thinks between reading and compter is give me a lots of information t[이름] before.>> I think both reading and internet give me lots of information t[이름] before.In Korea, \'justice\' is popular books.
>> In Korea, \"Justice\" is a popular book nowadays.
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