Hi teacner Lala ~ My homeworks are below^^

2012-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

학생이 쓴 원문

1.was shocked 2.has been teaching 3.has been said 4.will be published 5.remembers Music I like to listening to music.Because it makes me happy and stable when i feel not good. I like many types of music. i've loved k-pop. it is so exited and powerful. And classic make me luxury. Music plays a really important role people's life. Music is the way to relax people's mental. It depens on. But i usually i listening to music about 30 minutes. Learning to play music instruments is interested. And we sometimes feel proud. Western music can stimulate the imagination of people.So people can have a richness of life. Because imagination improve a level of life. And i heard that Western music can express various emotion of people.

강사 첨삭

Hi Winnie  Good job on your answered homework. Please capitalize the pronoun \" I \" such as I am interested. I feel proud. I am lucky. Just always be mindful with that rule. Take care and talk to you soon then. Teacher Lara Here are my corrections for you: 1.was shocked >> Correct2.has been teaching >> Correct3.has been said >> Correct4.will be published >> Correct5.remembers>> CorrectMusic>> CorrectI like to listening to music.Because it makes me happy and stable when i feel not good.>> I like listening to music because it makes me feel happy and calm when I don\'t feel good.I like many types of music. i\'ve loved k-pop. it is so exited and powerful.>> I like many types of music. I love listening to K-pop. It is so exciting and powerful/lively.And classic make me luxury. >> And classical music makes me feel luxurious.Music plays a really important role people\'s life. >> Music plays a really important role in people\'s life. Music is the way to relax people\'s mental.>> Music is the way to relax our mental state.It depens on. But i usually i listening to music about 30 minutes.>> It depends on the time but I usually listen to music for about 30 minutes.Learning to play music instruments is interested. And we sometimes feel proud.>> Learning to play musical instrument is interesting and we sometimes feel proud of ourselves.Western music can stimulate the imagination of people.So people can have richness of life. Because imagination improve a level of life. >> CorrectAnd I heard that Western music can express various emotions of people. >> Correct

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