Hi ther Verna.

Hello. Nice afternoon and more nice friday! I read again that text which we talked this morning. It was really shocked me. As heavy rains, many people in Asia have been a big troble. So when I saw the picture at first, I never suspect at all. And you told me the story, but I didn't understand very well. Thank you for awaken me. I think most of people might accept some news without criticize like me, especilly about the news of the natural disaster. At these point, this article is very helpful for people to criticize the news. Have an amazing weekend! Bye.

Hi! You did a good job in writing this composition! You were able to express your thoughts well. I noticed a few mistakes. Have a great weekend! T.Verna   Hello. >> Hello!Nice afternoon and more nice friday! >> Nice afternoon and a nice Friday!I read again that text which we talked this morning. >>I reread the text we talked about this morning.It was really shocked me. >>It really shocked me.As heavy rains, many people in Asia have been a big troble. >> With heavy rains, many people in Asia have been having trouble.So when I saw the picture at first, I never suspect at all. >> So when I saw the picture at first, I never suspected it at all.  And you told me the story, but I didn't understand very well. >>CORRECTThank you for awaken me.>>Thank you for awakening me.I think most of people might accept some news without criticize like me, especilly about the news of the natural disaster. >> I think most people might accept some news without criticizing like me, especilly about the news of the natural disaster.At these point, this article is very helpful for people to criticize the news.>> At this point, this article is very helpful for people who criticize the news.Have an amazing weekend! >>CORRECTBye. >>CORRECT