hi there

2013-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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hi my teacher! :) I entered online my page after a long time.haha.. It's lazy afternoon today. How status do you have about your cold? Your nosy voice is very very attractive than usual. hahaha Just kidding :) Actually, I was supposed to enroll the exam, TOEIC test, today just to check my English ability. But It's registration period was over so that I couldn't. hahaha.. I'm gonna try to have next month. Anyway.. I wish you get well soon and see you after a few hours. ^^

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Hello! Happy Thursday my dear [이름]!^^Thank you so much for sending this in! First time to see you write in the composition board my dear,kkk..Your effort is highly appreciated. Now you are teasing me.^^ Thanks for making me smile!^^See you in a while!^^ xoxoTeacher Cam^^ himy teacher! :)>>Hi, my teacher!^^I entered online my page after a long time.haha.. >>It\'s been a long time since I visited my page.^^It\'s lazy afternoon today.>>It\'s a lazy afternoon.^^How status do you have about your cold? >>What\'s the status of your colds? [asking about the flu]^^ >>How are you feeling today? >>Do you still have colds?Your nosy voice is very very attractive than usual. hahaha >>Your \"nasal\" voice is more attractive than usual.^^Just kidding :)>>Correct!Actually, I was supposed to enroll the exam, TOEIC test, today just to check my English ability. >>Actually, I was supposed to register for the TOEIC test today to check my English ability.But It\'s registration period was over so that I couldn\'t. hahaha.. >>But the registration period is over, so I couldn\'t.^^I\'m gonna try to have next month.>>I\'m going to try it next month. >>I\'m going to take it next month.Anyway..I wish you get well soon and see you after a few hours.^^ >>Correct!

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