Hi there~~!!^^

2013-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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First, I'm sorry about later for our class. I was very sick yesterday. Maybe I would have the flu. So I went to bed earler anyday. Now, I feel so good. Anyway, I'm sorry for that. Sencond is for homework. I was experienced pay through the nose sometimes. Most experience is for e~bey. I like buy something at e~bey. Generally, I buy something at e-bey after looking around store. But, sometimes e~bey decoy somepeople to deceive diffurent price and a thing. So,I was deceived to e~bey sometimes. However, it is not bad because it was experienced to me.^^ Did you had It sometimes?

강사 첨삭

An awe-inspiring Wednesday morning to you, Kirk!

Good thing you\'re feeling much better now than yesterday.

Perhaps, it\'s due to your exhaustion.

Take things easy, Kirk!

And regarding your answer to the question that I posted as your homework, indeed, some ads can be deceiving.

We have to check them out twice or even thrice.

We have to be intelligent consumers because these days, it won\'t do us good to be too trusting.

A little doubt can be good.

As for my case, I\'ve never been to this kind of situation. I have to say that I am stingy.

Catch you in a while, Kirk!

_Klein

First, I\'m sorry about later for our class.
>>First, I\'m sorry about our class a while back.

>>First, I\'m sorry for postponing our class a while ago.
I was very sick yesterday.

>>Correct

OR >> I was sick as a dog yesterday.

Maybe I would have the flu.
>>Correct

OR >> Maybe I will catch a cold.

>> Maybe I will get the flu.

So I went to bed earler anyday.

>>So I went to bed earlier yesterday than in any other day.
Now, I feel so good.
>>Correct!
Anyway, I\'m sorry for that.
>>Correct
Sencond is for homework.
>>I also included my homework below.
I was experienced pay through the nose sometimes.
>>I experience paying through the nose sometimes.

>Sometimes, I experience paying through the nose.
Most experience is for e~bey.
>>Most of my experiences are connected with E-bay.
I like buy something at e~bey.

>>I like buying something from E-bay.

Generally, I buy something at e-bey after looking around store.
>>Generally, I buy something from E-bay after looking around the store.
But, sometimes e~bey decoy somepeople to deceive diffurent price and a thing.
>>But sometimes, E-bay decoys some people to deceive them with the prices.
So,I was deceived to e~bey sometimes.

>>So I was once deceived by E-bay.

>>So sometimes, I am deceived by E-bay.
However, it is not bad because it was experienced to me.^^
>>However, it is not bad because it is a lesson for me.
>>However, it wasn\'t that bad because it served as a lesson for me to be a more critical buyer.

Did you had It sometimes?

>>Have you had this same experience as mine?

>>Did you experience such thing before?

>>Do you experience it sometimes?

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