Hi~~there^^

2013-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there^^Klein^^ How are you today^^? The wether on here is before snowy. So here is very cold now. What is wehter of there on the Philippines? I don't like coldness. So, I want to go to your country.T.T Anyway, I will go to my university for viewing choir concert to my junior in school. So, I must need to preparing something for my body will go outside.^^ Homework. In what kinds of situations are you feeling like you are on the edge of your seat? How do you handle these kinds of situations? I feel that when i wait a meal^^;;

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Hi, Kirk! How was the concert? We did touch on this topic a while back but you did not tell me how it went. Well, maybe you can still tell me tomorrow. And before I even forget, you are full of humor Kirk! You were able to turn a very serious question into something light. I was actually thinking of bigger things when I made this question but seeing your answer made me think otherwise. How do you handle such situation then, Kirk? Just answer my questions in class then. Kirk! Have a great afternoon! _Klein Hi there^^Klein^^>>CorrectHow are you today^^?>>CorrectThe wether on here is before snowy.>>It is snowy here. >>We have a snowy weather here.So here is very cold now.>>So it is very cold here now.What is wehter of there on the Philippines?>>How is the weather there in the Philippines?I don\'t like coldness. So, I want to go to your country.T.T>>I don\'t like it when it is cold, so I want to go to your country.Anyway, I will go to my university for viewing choir concert to my junior in school.>>Anyway, I will go to my university to watch the choir concert of my junior in school.So, I must need to preparing something for my body will go outside.^^>>So I need to prepare something to protect my body when I go out. >>So I must prepare something to keep me warm when I go outside.Homework.In what kinds of situations are you feeling like you are on the edge of your seat? How do you handle these kinds of situations? I feel that when i wait a meal^^;; >>I feel like I am on the edge of my seat when I\'m waiting for a meal.

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