Hi there^^

2013-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there^^ Had a good last weekend, Klein? I am not arranged for my work since last week. Because, My boss didn't answer My request for finish the job. So, I won't go to the office tomorrow. Just, I am worried about that i may dispute to my father and disappoint him for getout of the company. Anyway, I deside a point, it is my way is i making. So, I will not hesitate to make my life of myself. And last... My thinking is the same yours. Thank you Klein^^. See you tomorrow.^^ Kirk~~ -HOMEWORK FOR TODAY- Do you find it useful to have a truncated copy of a tome? Why do you say so? -I remembered some books so useful. And the best of they is "the history of church music" wroten by poff. Hong se won. Because, it is effected to my think about church music.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Kirk!

It\'s good to know that you had a great weekend.

Mine was really boring because I only stayed home. I was so restless and I think it could have been better if I pulled my acts together.

Nonetheless, I finished some of my masterpieces, so I guess, it was not quite bad.

Kirk, I want to get a hold of that book that inspired you. Even though I am not good at singing, I am still interested in music in some ways.

And Kirk, I will truly pray for your good relationship with your father.

Just do what you think is best for you but see to it that it won\'t hurt others.

Keep safe, Kirk!

I\'ll catch you again tomorrow!

_Klein

Hi there^^
>>Correct
Had a good last weekend, Klein?
>>I had a good rest last weekend, Klein.

>>Did you have a good weekend, Klein?
I am not arranged for my work since last week.
>>I am not yet accustomed with my work since we started with our new project last week.
Because, My boss didn\'t answer My request for finish the job.
>>This is because my boss didn\'t respond to my request to finish the job.

>>This is due to my boss, neglect of my request to get the work done.
So, I won\'t go to the office tomorrow.
>>Correct

Just, I am worried about that i may dispute to my father and disappoint him for getout of the company.
>>I am just worried that I may have a dispute with my father and disappoint him for leaving the company.
Anyway, I deside a point, it is my way is i making.
>>Anyway, I have decided. I am making it my way!
So, I will not hesitate to make my life of myself.
>>Correct
And last...
My thinking is the same yours.
>>And lastly, my thinking is the same as yours.

>>And lastly, I think the same way like you do.
Thank you Klein^^.
>>Correct
See you tomorrow.^^
Kirk~~
>>Correct
-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-
Do you find it useful to have a truncated copy of a tome? Why do you say so?
-I remembered some books so useful.

>>I remember some books that I found useful.

>>I remember some useful books.

And the best of they is \"the history of church music\" wroten by poff. Hong se won.
>>The best among them is \"The history of Church Music\" written by Poff Hong Se Won.
Because, it is effected to my think about church music.

>>It has affected my perspective towards church music.

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