Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you have a good day Klein??
I had enought resting time today, and i finshed something that i must to do.
Today's morning, i communicated with my father about my job.
And, we decided to i won't go to the office more.
But, this communication was finshed not good.
So,I had not been felt good about the happening in this day.
Anyway, from now on i am going to my way.
Please give me the cheering.
Have a good night Klein.
from Kirk.
*home work.
If i will meet my x - girlfriend, i'll say cool "hello" or "Long time no see. how are you these days?"
But, I don't want to meet her yet. because i am not recovered from the sorrow of parting.
강사 첨삭
A whimsical Tuesday afternoon to you, Kirk!
Try to talk to your father again to sort out everything.
Maybe you can also ask an advice from your mother. Like they say, \"Mother knows best!\"
Kirk, just takes things slowly, OK?
I want to share this with you. This is from a good friend of mine.
Here it goes:
You say, \"It is impossible.\" God says, \"All things are POSSIBLE.\"
You say, \"I can\'t figure it out.\" God says, \"I will direct your steps.\"
You say, \"I\'m always worried.\" God says, \"Cast all your cares on Me.\"
Kirk, don\'t be too hard on yourself and to your father.
I will catch you then tomorrow and please prepare your textbook.
Thank you Kirk!
May you continue to have a great afternoon.
_Klein
Do you have a good day Klein??>>Correct
OR >> Are you having a good day, Klein?I had enought resting time today, and i finshed something that i must to do.>>I had enough rest time today and I finished something that I must do.
>>I had enough rest time today and I finished something that I needed to do.Today\'s morning, i communicated with my father about my job.>>Correct
OR >> This morning, I talked with my father about my job.And, we decided to i won\'t go to the office more.>>And we decided that I won\'t go to the office anymore.
>>And we decided that I will go to the office no more.But, this communication was finshed not good.>>But our communication was not finished well.
>>But our communication did not end well.So,I had not been felt good about the happening in this day.>>So I have not been feeling good about what happened this day.Anyway, from now on i am going to my way.>>Correct
OR >> Anyway, from now on, I am going to take my own way.Please give me the cheering.>>Correct
OR >> Please give me some cheering.
>>Please cheer me on.Have a good night Klein.from Kirk.>>Correct*home work.
>>Here is my homework:If i will meet my x - girlfriend, i\'ll say cool \"hello\" or \"Long time no see. how are you these days?\">>If I will meet my ex-girlfriend, I will play it cool and say, \"Hello!\" or \"Long time, no see. How are you these days?\">>If I will meet my previous girlfriend, I will play it cool and say, \"Hello!\" or \"Long time, no see. How are you these days?\"
But, I don\'t want to meet her yet. because i am not recovered from the sorrow of parting.
>>But I don\'t want to meet her yet, because I haven\'t recovered from the sorrows of our break-up.
>>But I don\'t want to meet her yet, because I haven\'t recovered from our sorrowful break-up.
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