Hi there^^

2013-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there^^ Did you have a happy Christmas?^^ I did have a happy Christ-mas.^^ But, I have got a little disease. Monday in this week, a problem happened with my all body. It is an allergic reaction, So i have been be painful. Very many blisters occurred in my bady. It is very itchy. But I didn't find this reasons. Pray for me Plz. (But, The cantata was finished absolutely.^^ It is because of your pray^^ thank you^^) Homework~ *Do you think it is better to hang out with someone who is verbose? Why yes/no? My answer is "no". I do not agree this fact. Because, To talk with someone, talking about have not meaning is wasting the time. It is my idea. So, I do not agree this opinion.

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Congratulations to you and to your team, Kirk! I can sense that it\'s a job well done! It\'s just unfortunate because I didn\'t get to see your performance. Kirk, did you record your performance, by any chance? If yes, I want to see it, if you don\'t mind. And Kirk, I think your allergy has something to do with the weather. It can be skin asthma, so you better consult your doctor. Don\'t scratch any part of your body, though it is itchy. Wear thick clothes, Kirk, so you will stay warm and comfy. And Kirk, I would just like to share that sometimes, I truly am verbose. I just can\'t help it when there\'s so much to talk about, especially with my long lost friends. But I do agree with your opinion that a nonsensical conversation can be a waste of time. I just hope that you don\'t find any of our conversations nonsensical. Kirk, don\'t forget to see your doctor! I\'ll catch you then tomorrow. Again, congratulations for the success of your cantata! _Klein Hi there^^>>CorrectDid you have a happy Christmas?^^>>CorrectI did have a happy Christ-mas.^^>>CorrectBut, I have got a little disease.>>Correct Monday in this week, a problem happened with my all body.>>Monday, this week, I had a problem with my body. >>Monday, this week, a problem occurred with all my body part. >>Monday, this week, something wrong happened with my whole body.It is an allergic reaction, So i have been be painful.>>It is an allergic reaction, so I have been in pain. >>It is an allergic reaction, so it was painful.Very many blisters occurred in my bady.>>There were very many blisters popped out from my body. >>There were blisters all over my body. >>I had rashes all over my body. >>There were rashes all over my body.It is very itchy.>>CorrectBut I didn\'t find this reasons.>>But I didn\'t find the cause of this allergic reaction. >>But I did not find the root of this reaction.Pray for me Plz.>>Correct [please] OR >> Please pray for me.(But, The cantata was finished absolutely.^^ It is because of your pray^^ thank you^^)>>Our cantata went well. It is finally over now. Perhaps, it is because of your prayer, too.Homework~*Do you think it is better to hang out with someone who is verbose? Why yes/no?My answer is \"no\".>>CorrectI do not agree this fact.>>I do not agree with this fact. >>I do not agree with this thought.Because, To talk with someone, talking about have not meaning is wasting the time.>>This is because talking with someone without sense is a waste of time. >>Talking with someone who speaks with no sense is a waste of time.It is my idea.>>Correct OR >> This is what I think. >> This is my opinion.So, I do not agree this opinion. >>So I do not agree with this opinion. >>In conclusion, I do not agree with this notion.

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