Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Kirk!
I bet you\'ll be working out again later.
Like I said earlier, keep it up!
I want to see a picture of you before, when you were still a bit plump, and now that you are already looking leaner and younger.
You will never believe this, Kirk! When I was still in high school, I was so fat!
I can\'t even imagine how I ended up being so plump.
But now, due to a healthier lifestyle, I can say that I am truly fit.
And Kirk, it\'s good to hear coming from you how special English is for you.
Love this language and in time, it will love you back!
Have a great afternoon, Kirk!
_Klein
I would not write down for my today\'s storys, because i am tired now.T,T
>>I won\'t write down anything for my stories today because I am tired.
>>I won\'t write any of my stories today because I feel tired.
>>I am feeling tired now, so I won\'t write any of my stories for today.
It is the reason why i tired, because to exercise hard.
>>The reason I am tired is that I exercised hard.
>>The reason I\'m tired is I exercised too hard.
So now i am going to my bed.^^;;
>>Correct
OR >> So now, I am going to bed.
-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-
What do you think is the nitty-gritty of the English language? Why do you say so?
The nitty gritty of the English language is useful to use to all nations.
>>The nitty-gritty of the English language is useful to all people from all nations.
>>The nitty-gritty of the English language can be used by all nations.
And It is able to talk to all most other country people.
>>It enables people from all countries talk or communicate with each other.
>>It is the tool that almost all people from all countries use to communicate to the world.
It have a powerful fact, because someones can comunicating all most other country people is they can study all most culture and studies and new things freely.
>>It is a powerful tool because one person can communicate to almost all other people in other countries as they study different cultures and new things freely.
My thinking is like that.
>>Correct
OR >> This is how I see it.
>> This is how I perceive it.
>> This is my take on this matter.
>> This is what I can say about this topic.
>> This is my opinion.
How do you think about my idea?
>>What do you think about my idea?
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