Hi there^^

2014-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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I would not write down for my today's storys, because i am tired now.T,T It is the reason why i tired, because to exercise hard. So now i am going to my bed.^^;; -HOMEWORK FOR TODAY- What do you think is the nitty-gritty of the English language? Why do you say so? The nitty gritty of the English language is useful to use to all nations. And It is able to talk to all most other country people. It have a powerful fact, because someones can comunicating all most other country people is they can study all most culture and studies and new things freely. My thinking is like that. How do you think about my idea?

강사 첨삭

Hi, Kirk!

I bet you\'ll be working out again later.

Like I said earlier, keep it up!

I want to see a picture of you before, when you were still a bit plump, and now that you are already looking leaner and younger.

You will never believe this, Kirk! When I was still in high school, I was so fat!

I can\'t even imagine how I ended up being so plump.

But now, due to a healthier lifestyle, I can say that I am truly fit.

And Kirk, it\'s good to hear coming from you how special English is for you.

Love this language and in time, it will love you back!

Have a great afternoon, Kirk!

_Klein

I would not write down for my today\'s storys, because i am tired now.T,T
>>I won\'t write down anything for my stories today because I am tired.

>>I won\'t write any of my stories today because I feel tired.

>>I am feeling tired now, so I won\'t write any of my stories for today.
It is the reason why i tired, because to exercise hard.
>>The reason I am tired is that I exercised hard.

>>The reason I\'m tired is I exercised too hard.
So now i am going to my bed.^^;;
>>Correct

OR >> So now, I am going to bed.
-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-
What do you think is the nitty-gritty of the English language? Why do you say so?
The nitty gritty of the English language is useful to use to all nations.
>>The nitty-gritty of the English language is useful to all people from all nations.

>>The nitty-gritty of the English language can be used by all nations.
And It is able to talk to all most other country people.
>>It enables people from all countries talk or communicate with each other.

>>It is the tool that almost all people from all countries use to communicate to the world.
It have a powerful fact, because someones can comunicating all most other country people is they can study all most culture and studies and new things freely.
>>It is a powerful tool because one person can communicate to almost all other people in other countries as they study different cultures and new things freely.
My thinking is like that.
>>Correct

OR >> This is how I see it.

>> This is how I perceive it.

>> This is my take on this matter.

>> This is what I can say about this topic.

>> This is my opinion.
How do you think about my idea?

>>What do you think about my idea?

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