Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
How are you Klein^^?
I feel so good.^^
Just, i may to have the flu.T,T
During a day, I coughed. Just a lucky news is my voice does not change.^^;;
Maybe, I will sick at tomorrow morning.T,T
Even if i will sick, I will not cancer our class.^^
-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-
How do you manage your outlay? Enumerate tips on how to reduce one's outlay.
Hmmmm.....
I do not have some way how i manage my outlay.
Just, if i think "I have enough money.", I spend money do not worry.
But it is must used for development myself all most times.^^
강사 첨삭
Hi, Kirk!
What I live the most about your message is the part saying that even though you aren\'t going to feel well, you will still take the class.
Thank you so much! That is called dedication to your English studies!
You sounded a bit sick a while back but I admire your determination to still banter with me and really listen to whatever I had to say then.
Kirk, just stay indoors this weekend, so you can completely recover.
It is like shooting two birds with one stone because if you are home, you won\'t worry about your outlay, since there\'s none.
Keep safe, Kirk!
_Klein
How are you Klein^^?>>CorrectI feel so good.^^>>CorrectJust, i may to have the flu.T,T>>I may just have the flu.During a day, I coughed.
>>During the day, I coughed.
Just a lucky news is my voice does not change.^^;;>>Just a lucky news is my voice did not change.Maybe, I will sick at tomorrow morning.T,T>>Maybe, I will be sick tomorrow morning.Even if i will sick, I will not cancer our class.^^>>Even if I will be sick, I will not cancel our class.-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-How do you manage your outlay? Enumerate tips on how to reduce one\'s outlay.Hmmmm.....>>Correct! I do not have some way how i manage my outlay.>>I do not follow ways to manage my outlay.
>>I do not manage my outlay.Just, if i think \"I have enough money.\", I spend money do not worry.>>If I just think that I have enough money, I spend it without many worries.But it is must used for development myself all most times.^^
>>But it is a must for my own development at all times.
>>But is is a must for my development most of the time.
>>But most of the time, it is a must for my development.
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