Hi there^^

2014-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Did you have a good weekend? I had a good weekend.^^ I suffered to the flu during last week.T,T Especially, Sore throat made me hard. Fortunately, I feel better than yesterday.^^ (Of course, I don't recover perfactly until now.^^;;) What bad habit of yours could you have nipped in the bud? Explain your answer. Hmmm.... I have a bad habit. It is to postpone about now work. Sometimes, It make me troubled. So, if possible, i do to finish about now work. *Number 7* (I rejected thoroughly and resolutely what Professor Green requested.) *P.S Thesedays, I have felt hard about to make sentence. During my making sentence, all most things are wrong.T,T

강사 첨삭

Let\'s welcome the week right, Kirk!

Before going over the recommendations below, put a smile on your face.

It\'s good to hear that you had a good weekend, except for the part that you had sore throat.

Kirk, take good care of yourself!

You will still sing for me, so you better maintain the good condition of your vocal apparatus.

And Kirk, please don\'t feel frustrated whenever I rephrase your statements.

Honestly, every single word that you utter makes sense.

I just want to help you out in constructing better remarks.

Can you see the \"CORRECT\" marks below?

You are not that bad!

In fact, that I admire the most in you is you see to it that you banter with me no matter what.

So please, don\'t be disheartened, Kirk.

Just keep on working hard so we may meet our goals in due time.

Let us not procrastinate, because it sure is a bad habit.

I\'ll catch you in a few minutes Kirk!

_Klein

Did you have a good weekend?
>>Correct!
I had a good weekend.^^
>>Correct!
I suffered to the flu during last week.T,T
>>I suffered from the flu during the whole week.
Especially, Sore throat made me hard.
>>Especially my sore throat, it made me feel worse.

>>I felt worse due to my sore throat.

>>I even had sore throat.
Fortunately, I feel better than yesterday.^^

>>Correct

OR >> Fortunately, I feel better today than yesterday.
(Of course, I don\'t recover perfactly until now.^^;;)
>>Of course, I haven\'t completely recovered until now.
What bad habit of yours could you have nipped in the bud? Explain your answer.
Hmmm.... I have a bad habit.
>>Correct!
It is to postpone about now work.
>>It is procrastinating.
Sometimes, It make me troubled.
>>Sometimes, it troubles me.

>>Sometimes, it puts me in trouble.
So, if possible, i do to finish about now work.
>>So if possible, I finish my work which is due.
*Number 7*
(I rejected thoroughly and resolutely what Professor Green requested.)
>>Correct!
*P.S
Thesedays, I have felt hard about to make sentence.
>>These days, I feel like it\'s hard to make complete sentences.
During my making sentence, all most things are wrong.T,T

>>When I make sentences, almost everything is wrong.

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