Hi there^^

2014-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How are you^^ I'm fine^^ And thesedays, the weather of Korea is snowy. The snow does not melt until now. So the streets are very slippery. When i was going to the fitness center, i came near to sliding on the road.T,T It is a big problem to live people in Korea. Because, It cause to many accident to Korean people each winter seasons. The weater caster said, the temperature will be going to low until next week. Maybe, the freezing road will not melt until next week too. I may care my self.^^ Ah~~! And i find this animation Keiln. However, I could find just to make Korean speek. Maybe, Do you have the animaton to make English.? If you have this , can you send to me? homework for today. Asking : What is your nightcap? How do you feel after having it? In fact... I have never tried drinking alchol. So... i don't know feel what is the drunk.^^;; However, sometime, i think; sometimes a little drinking alcohol is not bad.

강사 첨삭

Another good morning to both of us, Kirk!

I\'m doing well. Thank you for checking on me.

How about you Kirk, how are you doing this time of the day?

It sure is freezing out there, so better stay indoors, Kirk.

Stay warm and comfy!

Regarding the animations that I shared with you, I don\'t know your contact details and you don\'t know mine.

Well, maybe you can check this site out: www.disneychannel-asia.com/DisneyChannel/

You may also find Phineas and Ferb in that site, so just surf their website.

Yesterday, I saw four episodes of Hello Jadoo and my favorite so far is the one entitled: \"An Old Umbrella\".

How I hope you will enjoy watching these animations, too!

And Kirk, with that of the nightcap, we can also have milk, tea, chocolate and some other kinds of beverages, not only alcohol.

But I have to say that I agree with your last statement. It is not bad to drink alcohol moderately, isn\'t it?

I\'ll catch you then later, Kirk!

_Klein

How are you^^
>>Correct

OR >> How are you?
I\'m fine^^
>>Correct

OR >> I\'m well.
And thesedays, the weather of Korea is snowy.
>>Correct

OR >> And these days, the weather in Korea is snowy.
The snow does not melt until now.
>>Correct

OR >> The snow piled up on the road is not melting.
So the streets are very slippery.
>>Correct!
When i was going to the fitness center, i came near to sliding on the road.T,T
>>When I was on my way to the fitness center, I nearly slipped.
It is a big problem to live people in Korea.
>>It is a big problem for those people who live in Korea.
Because, It cause to many accident to Korean people each winter seasons.
>>This is because Korean people get into many accidents during the winter season.
The weater caster said, the temperature will be going to low until next week.
>>The weather forecaster said that the temperature will drop next week.

>> The weatherman said that the temperature will continue to drop until next week.
Maybe, the freezing road will not melt until next week too.
>>Correct

OR >> Maybe, the frozen road will not melt until next week, too.
I may care my self.^^
>>I may care for myself.

>>I may take good care of myself.

>>I may be too cautious for my safety.
Ah~~!
>>Correct!
And i find this animation Keiln.
>>And I found the animation, Klein.

>>And I finally got a hold of a copy of the animation that you told me, Klein.
However, I could find just to make Korean speek.
>>However, I just found its version in Korean.
Maybe, Do you have the animaton to make English.?
>>Maybe you have a copy of this animation in English.

>>By any chance, do you have the English version of this animation?
If you have this , can you send to me?
>>If you have it, can you send it to me?
homework for today.
>>Correct

OR >> This is my homework for today.

>>Here\'s my homework for today.
Asking : What is your nightcap? How do you feel after having it?
>>Question: What is your nightcap? How do you feel after having it?
In fact... I have never tried drinking alchol.
>>Correct [spelling check: alcohol]
So... i don\'t know feel what is the drunk.^^;;
>>So I don\'t know how it feels to be drunk.

>>So I don\'t know the feeling of being intoxicated.
However, sometime, i think; sometimes a little drinking alcohol is not bad.

>>However, sometimes, I think that drinking a moderate amount of alcohol is not bad.

>>However, sometimes, I think that drinking alcohol moderately is not bad.

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